What's the best subtitle for John Grant's book: CO-OPPORTUNITY?

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  Ben - 2 years ago

  Muhammad Ali's poem is good: Me, we. Not appropriate for a subtitle though. What a star he was, and I hate boxing. Anyway here's a few efforts:

  Getting from here to the future.

  Get from here to the future together.

  Collectively getting from here to the future.

  Collectively getting to the future.

  Collectively getting to a good future.

  Collectively making a good future.

  Collectively making our future.

  I'm just going on the four given subtitles and the title. The link, http://www.psfk.com/2009/08/help-john-grant-edit-his-new-book-co-opportunity-introduction.html in the blog post pointing to this poll isn't working; server not found. Maybe just a temporary thing.

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  Paul Gailey - 2 years ago

  glocally particpate for a real world win

  (too enigmatic, mysterious?)

  or

  follow through glocally for real world benefit

  or

  partake for the world

  (with scope for creative typo emphasis for effect - infact can´t you even drop the "for")

  or

  partake in world improvement for a sustainable future

  .....!

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  Lea Simpson - 2 years ago

  Hey John, I added a new one about 'an all together better world'.

  I agree with Dan above, really like the sentiments but need them to be pithier.

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  John Grant - 2 years ago

  thanks Dan, that's good input :J

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  Dan Harvey - 2 years ago

  I like "The shared path" but "to a sustainable, resilient, prosperous world" is too wordy. I prefer the wording from one of the other subtitles i.e.:

  "The shared path to a better world"
  or
  "The shared path to a world fit for the future"

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