Did this story make any sense to you?

• Not one bit - I couldn't follow anything and lost interest half way through.

• I love learning new words and the thesaurus - I get it - an adult version of The Lion, The Witch, & The Wardrobe.

• I don't know why you just can't tell us who, what, when, why, and how?

• Write the Novel "The Cherry On Top" - I want the details!

• I don't know if this story is about the occult, the government, corporate greed or love gone bad.

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