How can I improve my short story?
The short story is too sexually explicit.
The subject matter about closeted gay actors has already been written about in fiction.
The story is okay work on grammar, flow, make the story more real.
I love the story good job Orville!
The short story isn't sexually explict enough it should be even hotter.
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