I'd keep reading, but just barely. I'm confused by the last sentence (not in a good way). Why is he having a problem having his confession heard? I can't think of any possible reason. The priest's comment is a little jarring, too disrespectful (although it is a way to let us know that Guillermo is old).
I'd keep reading, but just barely. I'm confused by the last sentence (not in a good way). Why is he having a problem having his confession heard? I can't think of any possible reason. The priest's comment is a little jarring, too disrespectful (although it is a way to let us know that Guillermo is old).