I feel that synopsis #1 creates enough interest, it tempts the reader, without giving away too much. It intrigues, makes the reader want to know more (that is the point right?). And the last line is the hook!
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I feel that synopsis #1 creates enough interest, it tempts the reader, without giving away too much. It intrigues, makes the reader want to know more (that is the point right?). And the last line is the hook!