Finding Magic's enticement elements (poll 5219839)

Finding Magic's enticement elements

The cover is eye-catching.

The cover would not catch my attention.

The cover was not interesting to me.

The cover interested me.

The back cover copy held no interest for me.

The back cover copy was OK but didn't get me to read the first page.

After reading the back cover copy, I wanted to read the first page.

After reading the fist page, I would turn the page.

After reading the fist page, I would not turn the page.

I did not read the sample.

I read the sample and wanted to read more.

I tried the sample and was not interested in more.

I never like stories written in the present tense.

The present tense narrative was okay in this story.

I do not read in this genre.

I do read in this genre.

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Eilidh - 13 years ago

Hi Ray,
You sent me this story to beta read and I loved it. In the first chapter you have a typo, "just desserts," should be just deserts--that which one deserves--so the waiter metaphor doesn't work.
Excellent story!
Cheers,
Eilidh