I agree that "Tipping the Velvet" has a stronger first page. The very first line engaged me as a reader. As if the author were asking me directly, "Have you ever tasted a Whitstable oyster?" Yes, both books start with backstory, which can be a turn off. However, "Tipping the Velvet" gave a sense of wanting. Wanting to be there, wanting to see the "chequered cloths" and the "girl with a rosy cheek". Very descriptive and engaging.
I agree that "Tipping the Velvet" has a stronger first page. The very first line engaged me as a reader. As if the author were asking me directly, "Have you ever tasted a Whitstable oyster?" Yes, both books start with backstory, which can be a turn off. However, "Tipping the Velvet" gave a sense of wanting. Wanting to be there, wanting to see the "chequered cloths" and the "girl with a rosy cheek". Very descriptive and engaging.