Mo Response:
Fak if "you're" going to nerd things up....at least be funny about it.
"YOU'RE" right! YOU'RE a small dick. YOU'RE not funny.
Hey, are you going to use the "YOU'RE" thing as your new bit?
Stop checking grammar man...you've got larger probs. Stick to trying to write jokes.
Michael Jagdeo's Answer:
Hey Mo,
I think you're getting the hang of it! No hard feelings dude; I appreciate the comments! The self-deprecating stuff gets the most laughs right now. It's all about falling forward, right?
...The idea is that she has become famous for no reason. Why not compare something you tried to do to be famous and had it fail. Like...you tried to make a sex tape...and all you got was a bill for $3000 and dick zits.
Saw some of your tweets... Ryerson: the Coffee Time of universities was pretty funny.
Michael Jagdeo's Answer:
Read my mind! From the previous posts that I've done, the feedback has been that people like my self-deprecating material.
How about: Some girls get STD’s when they have sex…what’d she get? A media fucking empire. I had sex on camera the other day, and all I got was a long sigh of disappointment followed by a lifetime supply of low self-esteem and a subscription to 'Feelings of Inadequacy Around Black Guys' Magazine.
Greg - 12 years ago
Hey man,
I think you have something....you might not have nailed it just yet. The idea that she has become famous from having a sex tape...there is an insight there....it's not that she has had sex just once.
The idea is that she has become famous for no reason. Why not compare something you tried to do to be famous and had it fail. Like...you tried to make a sex tape...and all you got was a bill for $3000 and dick zits.
Saw some of your tweets... Ryerson: the Coffee Time of universities was pretty funny.
Mo - 12 years ago
Fak if "you're" going to nerd things up....at least be funny about it.
Mo - 12 years ago
"YOU'RE" right! YOU'RE a small dick. YOU'RE not funny.
Hey, are you going to use the "YOU'RE" thing as your new bit?
Stop checking grammar man...you've got larger probs. Stick to trying to write jokes.
How bout this one...
Your dicks so small, you have to part your pubic hair to take a piss.
or...
Your dicks so small, your the only dude around who can get a handy from a squirrel.
Michael Jagdeo's Answer:
How bout this one...
There's a difference between your and you're.
or...
The English invented an apostrophe to denote a possessive case.
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Daniel's Response:
Hey you ever fart in the tub and bite the bubbles?
Michael Jagdeo's Answer:
I take showers. Why, what am I missing, Daniel?
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Greg's Response:
I'll go with the points and take not funny.
Michael Jagdeo's Answer:
Hi Greg - have you seen the updated post where I included jokes this time around? I realize that the first iteration was more of a rant than a stand-up comedy joke.
I think the Kardashian thing could be cool with work. But I can't help but wonder how Osama Bin Laden is doing..
Michael Jagdeo's Answer:
Hey dude - I actually changed up the bit after realizing it was a rant that didn't contain jokes, per se: http://michaeljagdeo.wordpress.com/2012/02/01/kim-kardashian-didnt-get-fucked-she-fucked-them/
Take a gander and let me know what you think. Thanks!
I updated the Kim Kardashian bite...let me know what you think: http://michaeljagdeo.wordpress.com/2012/02/01/kim-kardashian-didnt-get-fucked-she-fucked-them/
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Tim O - Theres something with the Kardashian shit for sure. Don't think you're quite there yet though. keep going.
Thanks! Please let me know what you think about the updated post where I try to tag and tag and tag the shit outta the joke.
Zane - What was the deal with the Greek debt crisis thing? That was a rough listen man.
I hear ya, Zane. It was my first foray into podcasting I think. I did it back in November or December, before I knew any best practices when it came to comedy.
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Gary - Definitely just a blog post.
Hey man. Let me know what you think about the updated bit where I try to inject jokes after making my point.
dom julio - Do you think you are getting too intellectual with the way you are coming up with jokes? Like the Kardashian stuff, you basically sound like you're preaching as opposed to delivering a joke. I don't know what was funny about it. Maybe cause it was just an observation that I already knew? Have you thought about posting like, other comedian material? or other funny stuff? Maybe you can repost some comedian tweets or something. As opposed to the Greek Debt Crisis??
You're right: in hindsight, I was just preaching there. Please check out the new version: http://michaeljagdeo.wordpress.com/2012/02/01/kim-kardashian-didnt-get-fucked-she-fucked-them/ - whaddaya think?
@JagdeoComedy is my twitter - let me know if you like that stuff.
That said, I do feel very strongly about approaching comedy from a different angle. Anyone, with enough time, can come up with a 'funny' five or seven minute set. Hell, you might even get signed with a major comedy agency.
But I want to do something more. I want to do something groundbreaking. I want to do me. While I figure out how to deliver the smart stuff humorously, I'm sure the material will need some crafting, carving, and revamping. But my heart is telling me to zig while everyone is zagging.
Frederico - 12 years ago
I think the Kardashian thing could be cool with work. But I can't help but wonder how Osama Bin Laden is doing..
greg - 12 years ago
I'll go with the points and take not funny.
Daniel - 12 years ago
Hey you ever fart in the tub and bite the bubbles?
Mo - 12 years ago
How bout this one...
Your dicks so small, you have to part your pubic hair to take a piss.
or...
Your dicks so small, your the only dude around who can get a handy from a squirrel.
dom julio - 12 years ago
Do you think you are getting too intellectual with the way you are coming up with jokes? Like the Kardashian stuff, you basically sound like you're preaching as opposed to delivering a joke.
I don't know what was funny about it. Maybe cause it was just an observation that I already knew?
Have you thought about posting like, other comedian material? or other funny stuff? Maybe you can repost some comedian tweets or something. As opposed to the Greek Debt Crisis??
gary - 12 years ago
Definitely just a blog post.
Zane - 12 years ago
What was the deal with the Greek debt crisis thing? That was a rough listen man.
Tim O - 12 years ago
Theres something with the Kardashian shit for sure. Don't think you're quite there yet though. keep going.
SWEET! THANKS GREG!
Do you mind if i feature you in my next blog post? It's interesting how the bit is enveloping from Darwin to self-deprecation.
jagdeocomedy@gmail.com
hahahah...ya man that's funny!
Mo Response:
Fak if "you're" going to nerd things up....at least be funny about it.
"YOU'RE" right! YOU'RE a small dick. YOU'RE not funny.
Hey, are you going to use the "YOU'RE" thing as your new bit?
Stop checking grammar man...you've got larger probs. Stick to trying to write jokes.
Michael Jagdeo's Answer:
Hey Mo,
I think you're getting the hang of it! No hard feelings dude; I appreciate the comments! The self-deprecating stuff gets the most laughs right now. It's all about falling forward, right?
Greg's Response:
...The idea is that she has become famous for no reason. Why not compare something you tried to do to be famous and had it fail. Like...you tried to make a sex tape...and all you got was a bill for $3000 and dick zits.
Saw some of your tweets... Ryerson: the Coffee Time of universities was pretty funny.
Michael Jagdeo's Answer:
Read my mind! From the previous posts that I've done, the feedback has been that people like my self-deprecating material.
How about: Some girls get STD’s when they have sex…what’d she get? A media fucking empire. I had sex on camera the other day, and all I got was a long sigh of disappointment followed by a lifetime supply of low self-esteem and a subscription to 'Feelings of Inadequacy Around Black Guys' Magazine.
Hey man,
I think you have something....you might not have nailed it just yet. The idea that she has become famous from having a sex tape...there is an insight there....it's not that she has had sex just once.
The idea is that she has become famous for no reason. Why not compare something you tried to do to be famous and had it fail. Like...you tried to make a sex tape...and all you got was a bill for $3000 and dick zits.
Saw some of your tweets... Ryerson: the Coffee Time of universities was pretty funny.
Fak if "you're" going to nerd things up....at least be funny about it.
"YOU'RE" right! YOU'RE a small dick. YOU'RE not funny.
Hey, are you going to use the "YOU'RE" thing as your new bit?
Stop checking grammar man...you've got larger probs. Stick to trying to write jokes.
Mo's Reponse:
How bout this one...
Your dicks so small, you have to part your pubic hair to take a piss.
or...
Your dicks so small, your the only dude around who can get a handy from a squirrel.
Michael Jagdeo's Answer:
How bout this one...
There's a difference between your and you're.
or...
The English invented an apostrophe to denote a possessive case.
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Daniel's Response:
Hey you ever fart in the tub and bite the bubbles?
Michael Jagdeo's Answer:
I take showers. Why, what am I missing, Daniel?
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Greg's Response:
I'll go with the points and take not funny.
Michael Jagdeo's Answer:
Hi Greg - have you seen the updated post where I included jokes this time around? I realize that the first iteration was more of a rant than a stand-up comedy joke.
http://michaeljagdeo.wordpress.com/2012/02/01/kim-kardashian-didnt-get-fucked-she-fucked-them/
Check it out and let me know what you think.
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Frederico's Response:
I think the Kardashian thing could be cool with work. But I can't help but wonder how Osama Bin Laden is doing..
Michael Jagdeo's Answer:
Hey dude - I actually changed up the bit after realizing it was a rant that didn't contain jokes, per se: http://michaeljagdeo.wordpress.com/2012/02/01/kim-kardashian-didnt-get-fucked-she-fucked-them/
Take a gander and let me know what you think. Thanks!
Greeeat Asssssssssssss!
I updated the Kim Kardashian bite...let me know what you think: http://michaeljagdeo.wordpress.com/2012/02/01/kim-kardashian-didnt-get-fucked-she-fucked-them/
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Tim O - Theres something with the Kardashian shit for sure. Don't think you're quite there yet though. keep going.
Thanks! Please let me know what you think about the updated post where I try to tag and tag and tag the shit outta the joke.
http://michaeljagdeo.wordpress.com/2012/02/01/kim-kardashian-didnt-get-fucked-she-fucked-them/
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Zane - What was the deal with the Greek debt crisis thing? That was a rough listen man.
I hear ya, Zane. It was my first foray into podcasting I think. I did it back in November or December, before I knew any best practices when it came to comedy.
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Gary - Definitely just a blog post.
Hey man. Let me know what you think about the updated bit where I try to inject jokes after making my point.
http://michaeljagdeo.wordpress.com/2012/02/01/kim-kardashian-didnt-get-fucked-she-fucked-them/
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dom julio - Do you think you are getting too intellectual with the way you are coming up with jokes? Like the Kardashian stuff, you basically sound like you're preaching as opposed to delivering a joke. I don't know what was funny about it. Maybe cause it was just an observation that I already knew? Have you thought about posting like, other comedian material? or other funny stuff? Maybe you can repost some comedian tweets or something. As opposed to the Greek Debt Crisis??
You're right: in hindsight, I was just preaching there. Please check out the new version: http://michaeljagdeo.wordpress.com/2012/02/01/kim-kardashian-didnt-get-fucked-she-fucked-them/ - whaddaya think?
@JagdeoComedy is my twitter - let me know if you like that stuff.
That said, I do feel very strongly about approaching comedy from a different angle. Anyone, with enough time, can come up with a 'funny' five or seven minute set. Hell, you might even get signed with a major comedy agency.
But I want to do something more. I want to do something groundbreaking. I want to do me. While I figure out how to deliver the smart stuff humorously, I'm sure the material will need some crafting, carving, and revamping. But my heart is telling me to zig while everyone is zagging.
I think the Kardashian thing could be cool with work. But I can't help but wonder how Osama Bin Laden is doing..
I'll go with the points and take not funny.
Hey you ever fart in the tub and bite the bubbles?
How bout this one...
Your dicks so small, you have to part your pubic hair to take a piss.
or...
Your dicks so small, your the only dude around who can get a handy from a squirrel.
Do you think you are getting too intellectual with the way you are coming up with jokes? Like the Kardashian stuff, you basically sound like you're preaching as opposed to delivering a joke.
I don't know what was funny about it. Maybe cause it was just an observation that I already knew?
Have you thought about posting like, other comedian material? or other funny stuff? Maybe you can repost some comedian tweets or something. As opposed to the Greek Debt Crisis??
Definitely just a blog post.
What was the deal with the Greek debt crisis thing? That was a rough listen man.
Theres something with the Kardashian shit for sure. Don't think you're quite there yet though. keep going.