Would you turn Jill's first page? Be tough. Comments help the writer.

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  • Vicki Zalascek - 11 years ago

    I love fantasy that starts with a frantic scene - even if it is a dream. If done right, there's nothing wrong with starting with a dream. The problem is those who can't write it correctly. Definitely want to find out what's going on.

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