Good characters; I like the names and the dialogue. But the image of it being a breakfast in his honor isn't there.....how many people are there? Is there noise and activity? I want to know why the most hated man is getting a breakfast honor.
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Good characters; I like the names and the dialogue. But the image of it being a breakfast in his honor isn't there.....how many people are there? Is there noise and activity? I want to know why the most hated man is getting a breakfast honor.