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I picked #1 because it's so concise. Concise is good. Concise is under-rated! It neatly encapsulates the heart of your story, touching on the genocide, the fact that Sachi is fated to complete a task, and the romance between her and Taphim. And because all of that is just hinted at, wrapped up nicely in a neat little package, it leaves the reader wanting to know more.
I picked pitch #2, but I think #3 could be the stronger. It just needs some mention of romance. That's what gives the story the tension more than Sachi getting captured.