What do you think of the opening paragraph?
I see nothing wrong with your opening but it does not hook me.
I see nothing wrong with your opening and it piqued my interest to read more.
Your wife is right, something is definitely wrong with your opening but I'm not sure what it is.
Your wife is right, something is definitely wrong with the opening and I'll tell you what it is in the comments section.
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