Would you turn the page after this prologue?

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  • Flora - 11 years ago

    I don't understand why this scored such a low read-on rating. The personality of the man is evident in his self-talk, mystery has been created as he's clearly not in the kind of place he's used to so why's he there? The scene is well-described as I can picture it clearly in my head.
    I'd love to know why others would not want to read on...

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