Opening is too "churchy" for the non-religious reader. Unless that's your market.
Do you really need tension on every page? Can't we simply tell a story for setup and move on? I look at writing, prose, style, content...a number of things. We can't always read something with tension; we would be exhausted.
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Opening is too "churchy" for the non-religious reader. Unless that's your market.
Do you really need tension on every page? Can't we simply tell a story for setup and move on? I look at writing, prose, style, content...a number of things. We can't always read something with tension; we would be exhausted.