It is really good, however, you have some issues with end of your first paragraph.
Perhaps shorten it altogether (the first paragraph) and leave the last two and it will be ready to go.
The book sounds interesting. What do Death Dealers do?Are they reapers? I want to read the book to find out more.
Good luck and thanks for sharing with us. Now I have more to watch for :)
It is really good, however, you have some issues with end of your first paragraph.
Perhaps shorten it altogether (the first paragraph) and leave the last two and it will be ready to go.
The book sounds interesting. What do Death Dealers do?Are they reapers? I want to read the book to find out more.
Good luck and thanks for sharing with us. Now I have more to watch for :)