Writing was good, but as a woman reading that "smell if a woman was willing" line, was a little off putting, so the writing needed to be good for me to want to continue. It was good but put me offside from the beginning.
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Writing was good, but as a woman reading that "smell if a woman was willing" line, was a little off putting, so the writing needed to be good for me to want to continue. It was good but put me offside from the beginning.